Let's try this again!
Nov. 15th, 2004 09:48 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
aisforamySigh. Let's try this again! My computer woes are keeping me from getting much done - every time I try to update, it freezes up.
Chapter two of Foreshadowing the Unexpected is up on ff.net and has been submitted to Fiction Alley.
Chapter one has a couple of more reviews to be addressed:
DarkLadyofSlytherin - I'm glad you decided to check this out! I hope you like it as much as the first! Rupert does get a little lesson in manners in the next chapter, but I don't know how much of it will really sink in.
cessa - I'm working on character definition, but it's a bit difficult as I'm trying to keep everything strictly in Connor's POV, so we can't tell what everyone else is thinking and doing at all times. Connor and Ivy are good friends, but I'm thinking that Zack has an eye on her - no romance in this story (at least not for the kids), but maybe inthe future!
RedTizzy - D'oh! You caught the one change I made AFTER my betas had looked it over, and I still screwed it up!! Ah well. Rupert's house isn't so hard to guess, given her personality. Updates should be coming weekly.
And on that note, I'm off to try once again to rid myself of this infernal trojan virus, or to drop my computer off a cliff - it's getting to that point. I'm going to be going to Mexico this coming Thursday- Monday, so the update will probably not come until late Monday or early Tuesday (if my compter hasn't self destructed by then).
No goofy link today - see previous posts and try one of those instead!
Chapter two of Foreshadowing the Unexpected is up on ff.net and has been submitted to Fiction Alley.
Chapter one has a couple of more reviews to be addressed:
DarkLadyofSlytherin - I'm glad you decided to check this out! I hope you like it as much as the first! Rupert does get a little lesson in manners in the next chapter, but I don't know how much of it will really sink in.
cessa - I'm working on character definition, but it's a bit difficult as I'm trying to keep everything strictly in Connor's POV, so we can't tell what everyone else is thinking and doing at all times. Connor and Ivy are good friends, but I'm thinking that Zack has an eye on her - no romance in this story (at least not for the kids), but maybe inthe future!
RedTizzy - D'oh! You caught the one change I made AFTER my betas had looked it over, and I still screwed it up!! Ah well. Rupert's house isn't so hard to guess, given her personality. Updates should be coming weekly.
And on that note, I'm off to try once again to rid myself of this infernal trojan virus, or to drop my computer off a cliff - it's getting to that point. I'm going to be going to Mexico this coming Thursday- Monday, so the update will probably not come until late Monday or early Tuesday (if my compter hasn't self destructed by then).
No goofy link today - see previous posts and try one of those instead!
